"Good night, good night! Parting as such, is sorrow so sweet and bitter?"
we agreed to part go separate ways parting as such, with sorrow bitter 'n sweet? sorta chat sometimes meet up too, politely, with 'how's it going' texts for the kids? sorta there's truce in trenches with lay of arms, air kiss hugs looking away with humphs of disdain? sorta destruction is sudden, so quick 'n easy fast to gel 'n dry healing is slow takes time to grow so we go with the flow? sorta we're still friends aren't we? missing the echos in mementos that ply sly sighs? sorta
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