J.E.B.

An age of innocence;                                                                                           
time shall be no more

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Juanita Warden

June 30, 2011 at 9:52 AM

Enjoyed this very much.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 12:10 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest John. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

May 18, 2010 at 6:09 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest with this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 12, 2010 at 3:42 AM

John, Those true words make me want to visit your brother, Jim...SMILES with humor! Excellent writing! Congratulations on your HM in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2010 at 3:35 PM

Love it, a great theme for a monoku, congrats, John!

Joyce Johnson

May 5, 2010 at 8:26 AM

Regretfully true. Congratulations on your hm. Joyce

May 5, 2010 at 8:25 AM

Enjoyed this poem the first time I read it. So much truth in your words. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen