Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Jealousy Drama -

The joy of the sun is fleeting

                                         You know you slowly

                                        sucks the spark of life

                                          out of your victims

                                        You crush and step on

                                              my feelings

                                        The negativity is like

                                        drowning in quicksand

                                 Stinky socks make me nauseous

                                     A voice that asks questions

                         Who, what, where, why, how, which and when

                          The control mechanism and your uncertainty

                                The support beam should be strong

                              For a long time it has been a cold and

                                      shady fog been between us

                                       The air smells of jealousy

                                     I've had enough ... It sucks !!!






11/08/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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It sucks Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
3rd place in the contest

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L. J. Carber August 23, 2020 at 10:28 AM Very powerful, very sad, but also very courageous --congrats on all, Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2020 at 1:29 AM - Many thanks for the visit, comments and congratulations L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta August 22, 2020 at 5:22 AM Excellent composition. You have portrayed jealousy accurately. Big Congrats on your well deserved win. Love. Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2020 at 1:28 AM - Many thanks for the visit, comments and congratulations Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt August 12, 2020 at 11:32 AM Sunshine, great entry for the contest. Jealousy really is a monster - you describe its effects so well. Awesome image, too! Best wishes and hugs ~ John Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2020 at 11:22 AM - A real Frankenstein's monster, John ... you can feel trapped inside a nightmare with a monster :) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire August 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM Jealousy really can "suck" the joy out of life, Sunshine. Can relate to the feeling of "drowning in quicksand," and the constant, suspicious questions. Very well written. Best wishes in Kai's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2020 at 11:11 AM - Jealousy is the strongest poison I know, Carolyn ... it kills all love without hesitation - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper August 12, 2020 at 11:15 AM Wonderfully played out, Sunshine, I could never understand why people have those feelings. One cannot change the feelings of another person. They should just walk a away and find someone that does care. Good luck in the contest. Blessing sweet lady Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2020 at 11:16 AM - You're right, Eve ... "One cannot change the feelings of another person" ... but reality comes to light ... some do not love ... they want to own - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos August 12, 2020 at 6:33 AM Hi my good friend Anne-Lise, creatively written with your golden pen- ugly when jealousy creeps into a relationship, it goes sour quickly.Well penned Sunshine Smile, Hugs and love, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2020 at 11:06 AM - Love breeds jealousy, and jealousy kills love my dear friend Jenni :) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 12, 2020 at 5:20 AM Masterfully writing that responds to the challenge very well dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2020 at 6:59 AM - Thank you very much for your support and lovely comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf August 11, 2020 at 7:29 PM Ha, ha! Love those 'stinky socks.' They sure do suck!! Big-Time!! Thanks for the chuckle, and G.L. in the contest, Anne-Lise. :) gw Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2020 at 6:58 AM - A good rule of thumb: Always wear clean socks, Gordon :))) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus August 11, 2020 at 12:32 PM Jealousy erodes the foundations of a relationship, Anne-Lise, and you spell it out well in this striking poem. I like the mixture of serious-witty:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2020 at 6:56 AM - Jealousy kills a relationships slowly but surely, Paul - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit August 11, 2020 at 12:12 PM Love your take on the theme, Anne-Lise. You painted that scene brilliantly. Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2020 at 6:54 AM - Thank you very much dear Vijay, always a lovely support from you ... I really appreciate it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael August 11, 2020 at 12:10 PM Well expressed here...although you know it before you see it... Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2020 at 12:40 PM - Thank you very much for your comment, Arturo - Some people keep their cards well hidden - but, it will come to light one day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan August 11, 2020 at 11:32 AM Lack of trust really sucks. Those stinky socks would've been more than enough for me. I hope it does well in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2020 at 11:36 AM :))) ... had to have a little humor into all this misery, Jenna :) - Thank you very much for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)