Jealous Sea Waves To Self

Ocean drowns its envy, 
in saury allure—
sans fin, seize (an)other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Faulkner Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 1:06 PM
A very unique take on the mystery of the ocean, congratulations~
Rodgers Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Jamie your poem is a masterful encapsulation of the tumultuous emotions that dance within the vast expanse of the ocean, rendered with poetic brevity and evocative imagery. The subtle play on words and the nuanced exploration of envy within the ceaseless waves create a mesmerizing depth that lingers, much like the ebb and flow of the sea itself. - Blessings, Daniel
Thomas Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Thank you for taking the time to so thoughtfully respond to my verse here. I genuinely appreciate the close reading.
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