Jealous Jaded Jackals

Jealous Jaded Jackals

                 Decadent darkness placed upon the setaceous shrine
                For the Angels wilfully weep and ignominiously entwine
                    The fermented fear sprouts jealous jaded jackals
                  As Love approaches with salivating slaving shackles

                        With vindictive vines that crushingly choke
                          And clasping claws that piercingly poke
                        Is it hallowed heaven or is it hollowed hell
                    For it is only Love in a sacrificial sacculated shell.



Oct.16.2016
Words Drowned In Tears Poetry - Contest
Sponsored by: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Winged congratulations on your win in my contest well done
Y. Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Hi WW, This is a good take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your win:) Alexis
Nayak Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:29 AM
this is lovely and poetically written Dear WW...jealous and love's sacrifice.... it hurts...Congrats //love, Anu:)
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:05 PM
very good write, ^WW^ very poetic verse.. Congratulations on you win :) Hugs eve
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Glad you are still embracing your talent and letting it take you where it will. Regards David
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Wow W^^W you really have gone to town on the theme and the alliteration is fabulous:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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