Jealous Garden

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Wildflowers 
bloom 
in your 
springtime
eyes
as a 
jealous 
garden 
wonders 
when winter 
will 
arrive

~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 20, 2019 at 5:45 AM
Hi Chris, Love the way you personified your garden. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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November 20, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Jennifer for always being so nice to me.
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November 20, 2019 at 1:27 AM
Very anti-romantic cool, Chris! Down in the dirt earthy ink view. Splendid negativity expressed w/summer blues glee. Mighty fine poetry indeed. Love and more love always.
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November 20, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thanks so much Freddie. Hey, at least I remembered to post the poem. : ) Thank you again my friend. I always appreciate your kind thoughts.
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November 19, 2019 at 11:17 PM
There will always be a jealous garden, I suppose, and what becomes of it when winter strikes? Curious piece, Chris ~
Green Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Yes there will be and often they are nothing more than blooming idiots. : ) Thank you my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
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November 19, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Wow. A FAVE for me.
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November 20, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. That means a lot to me
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Great one Chris. Creatively written :)
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November 20, 2019 at 7:22 AM
Thanks Heidi. I am glad you liked this
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Since jealousy is green, its best to keep winter white and innocent, Lol, I enjoyed your poetry dear Chris.
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November 20, 2019 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
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November 19, 2019 at 1:54 PM
- It doesn't have to be jealous ... they're all beautiful - Lovely written, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 19, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thank you my friend. :)
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November 19, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Oh NICE!!! xomo
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November 19, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Thanks Maureen. :)
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November 19, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Hi Chris, I'm wondering when "winter" arrive too. I enjoyed the read my friend:-) Alexis
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November 19, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Anish Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Nice personification here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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November 19, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so much Matthew. I appreciate your kind words.
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November 19, 2019 at 12:07 PM
sigh....so beautiful... you pen these so well my friend.... hugs
Green Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Thanks Sandy. Just hoping for a few smiles today. I am happy you stopped by
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