Notes About The Poem

Life is song and dance

we learn to share, 

as we go along.

Jazzier Times

Could I capture time?
Seasoned beyond my hands
While consciousness raved
Traumatized before graves
Till second breath was mine.

Twilight trumpet sound
Two were as gifts long lost
I perked from waking
Yet craved sober thinking
Grace and mercy were found.

Each dawn electric
Unconquerable fears
I had to dissolve
Oh, I've tasted being loved
My views were eclectic.

Dew, rest, and food
With harmony, I learned,
Fuels awakening
And passions nurturing
Those elevate one's mood.

Ella Fitzgerald's
Quiet voice in volume-
Her heaven sent songs,
Inspired all along
Sits snug in time's annals.

If I could I would
Summon more power
Quite with quietude
I'd carve myself anew
With blessings from our God.

And yet, I'm alive
Saner than yesteryear
Reflections' my friend
Showing foes with pretense 
Shall we see eye to eye.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 22, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Hi Iris, it must have been a sensation to share the electric feeling. Epic to a long lost feeling. I haven't read many poems of yours, YET! But, as of today, it is a must. I want to read and understand your poetry a little more. Your way of writing strikes my interest. Please tell me, do you read your poems out loud or is it an inner poem. This is the way I read the first line, ((out loud)) COULD I CAPTURE TIME? - - - - - i paused for a few seconds then kept on. *i just love this..SKAT
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July 23, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, my dear. I must hold to reading out loud, always. this one I did ...
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July 22, 2015 at 3:29 AM
- Iris, I'm enjoying this poem very much (read it three times already :)) - really lovely written! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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July 23, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Holding to Tanka form for a while, and extending... Thank you, Anne.
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