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Jay Lounges On Sill

jay lounges on sill

grasping worms for morn's breakfast---

trilled choir forgotten




Bird themed haiku for Tania Kitchin 
7/27/2018

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Michelle Faulkner

July 29, 2018 at 1:15 PM

Congratulations, Nette, on your delightful haiku!

Susan Gentry

July 28, 2018 at 5:29 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Paul Callus

July 28, 2018 at 2:34 PM

No singing on an empty stomach:) But I can well break the rule just to sing praise to you, Nette! Hugs // paul

Joanna Daniel

July 28, 2018 at 1:37 AM

Belated congratulations on your win with this beauty, Nette:)

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2018 at 8:16 PM

I still can't get over us both thinking of blue jay and a worm! (originally I was gonna do robin but then I looked online and saw blue jays enjoyed the sport and that seemed more colorful to me than robin) Congrats, my friend. She liked yours better!!