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Jay Lounges On Sill

jay lounges on sill grasping worms for morn's breakfast--- trilled choir forgotten Bird themed haiku for Tania Kitchin 7/27/2018

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2018 1:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Nette, on your delightful haiku!

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/28/2018 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2018 2:34:00 PM

No singing on an empty stomach:) But I can well break the rule just to sing praise to you, Nette! Hugs // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/28/2018 1:37:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win with this beauty, Nette:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2018 8:16:00 PM

I still can't get over us both thinking of blue jay and a worm! (originally I was gonna do robin but then I looked online and saw blue jays enjoyed the sport and that seemed more colorful to me than robin) Congrats, my friend. She liked yours better!!