Java

My day ain't complete sans a cuppa java

And it must be as blisterin' hot as flowin' lava

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 3:57 PM
I don't know about complete. But mine can't even get going without some steamin' joe. Don't burn yourself. Have a perky day. :)
Collins Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Bob - I love Anne-Lise's comment. Ditto. love, Kathy
Bauer Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 4:39 PM
hey bob! this is wonderful and i totally agree with you! (i think you meant "as" instead of "has" in the second line). perfect rhyme, too! :)
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 3:24 PM
My sweet friend, Noah's poem can not compete though the topic is TWO [that's okies] you my dear are only permitted 2 lines, which is why Java works and Noah doesn't HUGS Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Just a glimpse into the life of Robert..That coffee is great in the morn..An eye opener for sure..Great way to express that thought..Enjoyed reading..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:12 PM
awesome little couplet, Robert!
Carrillo Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Robert; this is too short, but I like it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Sivey Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful, simply a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly delightful poem! My cup of choice is hot cocoa, wonderful on a cold Autumn morning! I was pleased to have gotten the opportunity to read this piece, Great Work!!
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 11:51 AM
You submitted the wrong poem my friend, you did not submit this one...you gave me a way Long long one LOL and your soupie mail came 3 times [giggle] GREMLINS???? Light & Love
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October 18, 2012 at 11:24 AM
The first thing I "saw" ... when I read your poem bob ... - You in a promotional film with your cup of Java. - .... lol .... I share your desire - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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