Notes About The Poem

For the 'Writing Challenge -J Words -' Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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Jaunt

Jump into your car or hop aboard a plane or train.
Allow yourself some fun! Even one weekend will do.
Unburden yourself of stress. Life can feel brand new
Near the ocean, inside the city or around unusual terrain.
Tell me though that I will be the one to tag along with you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Andrea, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words !
Alex Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 3:36 AM
A sweet acrostic. Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 1:26 AM
Wonderful writing as is always when I read what you write. I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Buhagiar Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Superb Acrostic. no travel for me, alas. But I can dream... Well written Andrea. Hugs. xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 12:11 AM
That's the whole idea, Victor. Low maintenance. That's why I love my rose bushes, which reminds me. I need to trim off the dead branches.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 8:46 PM
Andrea, I too would love to jaunt with you. A marvellous Acrostic, best wishes for the contest… Belle
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 9:13 PM
Muchas gracias, muchacha.
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Andrea, your poem is truly exquisite. It evokes a profound sense of escapism, and I long for the opportunity to embark on an adventure alongside you in the future.
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 9:12 PM
Thanks, Sotto
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 3:16 PM
its so lovely to get away Andrea, will come on a jaunt with you one day lol:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 9:12 PM
It would be so nice
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