Jaundiced Eyes

Jaundiced Eyes

Jaundiced eyes covet past tense masquerades
In crypts where yellowed brittleness recall bitterness
Where glassy-eyed failures suck truth dry - 
Vampires with addictions
Distorting graveyards at the altar
Of introspection
Like green-eyed monsters
Grasping
At monetary dust of renunciation -
As thirty silver coins of delusion
Smash against a field of potter’s headstones
Of mummified expectations –
Snake eyes coil to strike
Festering bones of rose colored bifocals
Framed with near-sighted prejudice
In cock-eyed bloodied clarity distorted
Prescriptions, 
Opaque, ochre tinted corrections
See beauty as bloodless crumbling petals
When black holes of envy blind side the mindful
Blaspheming the self-evident
In catacombs of blind spots
Where the battered armor of rightness lies still
Awaiting revelation’s softly spoken new light -
A perpetual whispering
In humility's tears restoring lenses knowing the need
For a baptism of clear-eyed focus.

6-25-21
Contest: The Jaundiced Eye
Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/23/2021 2:49:00 PM
A profound and image-filled treatise, Sam--e.g., 'black holes of envy'- congrats, amiga!
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Date: 7/2/2021 6:41:00 PM
In order to be clear eyed we need to open the doorway to our souls. Beautifully written Sam. Congratulations on your winning poem :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/23/2021 9:37:00 AM
Hi Rose! I can't believe I missed your gracious feedback. Thank you! I couldn't agree more. Searching for the truth opens us to amazing experiences! Hope you are well. Sending you blessings.
Date: 7/2/2021 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/2/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Theme was a gourmet feast for thought! Blessings! Happy 4th!
Date: 7/1/2021 11:52:00 PM
Blaspheming the self-evident In catacombs of blind spots Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/2/2021 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris. This theme was a wonderful source of meditation and pondering the implications of jaundiced eyesight. All the best.
Date: 7/1/2021 10:35:00 PM
Sam, thank you for participating in the contest with this absolutely outstanding work. Congrats on your win! Do have a look at the next contest ‘Tat Tvam Asi’
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/2/2021 11:05:00 AM
Hi Seeker! I can only say how grateful I am for the theme of this contest - a real eye opener - and for your gracious placement! Your contest themes always provide an amazing challenge to look beneath the surface and find ever evolving new insights. Thank you! All the best.
Date: 6/26/2021 5:26:00 AM
Another winner. Wonderful entry for contest. Sponsor said use your own unique title . So change the title of poem. All the best friend. Enjoy your weekend.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/2/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend! This theme provided a unique opportunity to examine the ways opinions often cast a jaundiced eye on our ways of looking at truth! Blessings! Have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 6/25/2021 11:38:00 AM
Wow! Sam, you have penned a very compelling read loaded with exceptional images. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/2/2021 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Milt. This theme was a real adjustment of sight and the cast of the jaundiced eye on every part of life. So grateful for your ever present support! Have a great weekend!
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