Jaundiced Eyes

Jaundiced Eyes

Jaundiced eyes covet past tense masquerades
In crypts where yellowed brittleness recall bitterness
Where glassy-eyed failures suck truth dry - 
Vampires with addictions
Distorting graveyards at the altar
Of introspection
Like green-eyed monsters
Grasping
At monetary dust of renunciation -
As thirty silver coins of delusion
Smash against a field of potter’s headstones
Of mummified expectations –
Snake eyes coil to strike
Festering bones of rose colored bifocals
Framed with near-sighted prejudice
In cock-eyed bloodied clarity distorted
Prescriptions, 
Opaque, ochre tinted corrections
See beauty as bloodless crumbling petals
When black holes of envy blind side the mindful
Blaspheming the self-evident
In catacombs of blind spots
Where the battered armor of rightness lies still
Awaiting revelation’s softly spoken new light -
A perpetual whispering
In humility's tears restoring lenses knowing the need
For a baptism of clear-eyed focus.

6-25-21
Contest: The Jaundiced Eye
Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Carber Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 2:49 PM
A profound and image-filled treatise, Sam--e.g., 'black holes of envy'- congrats, amiga!
Rose  Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 6:41 PM
In order to be clear eyed we need to open the doorway to our souls. Beautifully written Sam. Congratulations on your winning poem :)
Kauffman Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Hi Rose! I can't believe I missed your gracious feedback. Thank you! I couldn't agree more. Searching for the truth opens us to amazing experiences! Hope you are well. Sending you blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Theme was a gourmet feast for thought! Blessings! Happy 4th!
Alex Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 11:52 PM
Blaspheming the self-evident In catacombs of blind spots Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so much Chris. This theme was a wonderful source of meditation and pondering the implications of jaundiced eyesight. All the best.
Seeker Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 10:35 PM
Sam, thank you for participating in the contest with this absolutely outstanding work. Congrats on your win! Do have a look at the next contest ‘Tat Tvam Asi’
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Hi Seeker! I can only say how grateful I am for the theme of this contest - a real eye opener - and for your gracious placement! Your contest themes always provide an amazing challenge to look beneath the surface and find ever evolving new insights. Thank you! All the best.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Another winner. Wonderful entry for contest. Sponsor said use your own unique title . So change the title of poem. All the best friend. Enjoy your weekend.
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Thank you so much my friend! This theme provided a unique opportunity to examine the ways opinions often cast a jaundiced eye on our ways of looking at truth! Blessings! Have a wonderful weekend!
Hankins Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Wow! Sam, you have penned a very compelling read loaded with exceptional images. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thank you so much Milt. This theme was a real adjustment of sight and the cast of the jaundiced eye on every part of life. So grateful for your ever present support! Have a great weekend!
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