Kash Poet Poet Rhyme

Jasmine's Whisper

Jasmine's whisper fills the air
chirping birds in trees
paintbrush touch in distant sky
coldness in the breeze.
On twilight's  pink wings
a journey starts towards night
amid Church bells' ring.



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Placement: 3rd ;(October 2012)

By:kash poet

Date:3rd Oct.2012

Contest:Wonder of Dusk in Seguidilla

 Sequidilla--- is Spanish in origin: a verse  with 7 lines with a syllable count of 7, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7, 5…

Line 2 rhymes with Line 4,and line 5 rhymes with line 7

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Debbie Duncan February 20, 2013 at 12:26 PM Love it kash ;} and you got a win ;}

Isaiah Zerbst November 12, 2012 at 10:13 AM Interesting form. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for stopping by.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 19, 2012 at 7:27 AM Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Kash. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

Sandra Adams October 18, 2012 at 8:07 PM beautiful images...very nicely written poem, enjoyed the read :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 9, 2012 at 10:56 PM CONGRATS KASH ON A SUPER VICTORY .. AMAZING LUV ..

Barbara Gorelick October 9, 2012 at 7:03 AM You just keep getting better..congrats. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown October 9, 2012 at 5:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Kash. Love, Carol

Irfana Ali Bhat October 9, 2012 at 3:05 AM this is fabulous...congratulations on ur win..:)))

Wilma Neels October 8, 2012 at 5:11 AM Kash, this is just a beauty. Enjoyed it!! Hope you had a great day yesterday.. :)

Cynthia Alvez October 5, 2012 at 8:49 AM Soooo beautiful...a painting in words! My senses reeling! Cynthia

Len Gasun October 4, 2012 at 9:18 PM You're a great painter in this awesome poem , Kash!!! I love it!!!! Thanks for your wonderful birthday greetings!!! you, too! it's coming!!!! hugs:) Leonora

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2012 at 2:20 PM Kash, the monoku this time was not imagined. Remember the barn swallows I wrote about this summer? Those same birds left last month and their nests stayed above our door. I really miss them!! waiting for new poetry from you. soupmail.

Nette Onclaud October 4, 2012 at 2:01 PM ahha, kashi bud .. is this for our yasmin?.. :) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi October 4, 2012 at 1:38 PM feels better Kash ;)..oh I see it had to be in Seguidilla form ;) [poo lol] XXXOOO Light & Love

Lucilla Carrillo October 4, 2012 at 11:47 AM With the paint brush - you have painted this beautiful. Thanks for reading my work. Have a great day. Lucy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 3, 2012 at 9:50 PM sparkling and sensational portrait of dusk Kash .. best of luck luv for fascinating imagery ..

Debra Squyres October 3, 2012 at 3:46 PM You've painted quite a picture there,,,and it's animated with sounds !! Love it !! Thanks for dropping by my page !!

Poet Destroyer A October 3, 2012 at 3:08 PM Hi Kash, and absolute exquisite image.. good luck in the contest...xox~pd

Debbie Guzzi October 3, 2012 at 3:08 PM Lovely!!! soup mail HUGS Light & Love

Daver Austin October 3, 2012 at 2:50 PM Jasmine becomes this autumn lady. This is what strikes me. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver

Phyllis Babcock October 3, 2012 at 2:48 PM Wonderful poem you have posted today. Good luck in the contest. Love Phyl

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2012 at 2:21 PM this looks AWESOME, Kashinath. Great poetry from you today!!

Russell Sivey October 3, 2012 at 2:18 PM Wow, this is a truly beautiful write my friend! You have successfully crafted a poem that will do awesomely within Nette's contest! I just love what you have created here Kashi, a tremendous piece put together, what a dynamic write! You have a wondrous poem here, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 3, 2012 at 1:18 PM Lovely write kash, I am sure this will do well xx

Barbara Gorelick October 3, 2012 at 1:18 PM Such a beauty! Captivated with the first line! BG

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