Jasmine's Whisper
Jasmine's whisper fills the air
chirping birds in trees
paintbrush touch in distant sky
coldness in the breeze.
On twilight's pink wings
a journey starts towards night
amid Church bells' ring.
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Placement: 3rd ;(October 2012)
By:kash poet
Date:3rd Oct.2012
Contest:Wonder of Dusk in Seguidilla
Sequidilla--- is Spanish in origin: a verse with 7 lines with a syllable count of 7, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7, 5…
Line 2 rhymes with Line 4,and line 5 rhymes with line 7
Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2012
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