Jasmine Secrets

Waterfall wishes
Jasmine secrets serenade-
Cockatoo tells all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 20, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Unique haiku, Mike. I enjoyed it very much. ~Warren
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October 20, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thank you so much Warren!!
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September 28, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Mike, this is my kind of haiku - cleverly crafted with beautiful imagery! Love it! Hugs and a fav for sure. Pandita
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September 28, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Thanks Pandita I am so pleased that you liked it xxoo
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:29 PM
what gorgeous imagery Mike - talking of gorgeous I LOVE the new avatar!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Wow, aren't you sweet!!! Thanks so much xxoo Happy Friday!!
Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 9:52 PM
So much in such a small package; had to fav this one. Well penned.
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September 27, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you so much M.L. xxoo
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September 26, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Beautiful images, best luck in the contest!
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September 27, 2018 at 7:35 AM
You're so sweet! Thanks Tania xxoo
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September 26, 2018 at 12:34 AM
Perfect tropical image Mike. Good luck. Tom
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September 26, 2018 at 5:53 AM
Thanks Tom !!
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September 25, 2018 at 6:02 PM
I am familiar with both that have given me joy Mike. I enjoyed your lovely haiku! : )
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September 25, 2018 at 8:14 PM
You’re so kind Connie, thank you so much xxoo
B. Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Awesome haiku, my friend.. I really love jasmine!! Terrific imagery.. Blessings..
Sands Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Very nice Mike. Wonderful to read today. Happy Tuesday :)
Gentile Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Happy Tuesday to you Heidi,? Thanks so much xxoo
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September 25, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Great haiku Mike--well done!
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September 25, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Thank you Vijay !!
One Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 12:25 PM
great imagery...love the second line..
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September 25, 2018 at 1:22 PM
I thought you would with all those sssesss!!!! Thanks SO
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September 25, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Lovely, Mike.
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September 25, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Thank so much, Line xxoo Happy Tuesday!
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