Jasmine

wishful petals bloom
dance upon my memories
soothing scents of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Segal Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Sweet Haiku! my son is also Jimbo! thank you for your comment, love Simone
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 4:53 PM
hmmm I want a different word line 3? first word? something with more sweetness? Light & Love
Nieves Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 2:45 PM
Odoriferous romance you wrote here Goff. SWEEEET!
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Like the Haiku. That Jasmine has a lovely scent. Keep writing. Sara
Strand Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Always a lovely aroma to your poetry Jim.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome blog comments today
Freeman Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 8:12 AM
She must have been pure James, that's what I read in your Haiku, as the wishful petals bloom. Smile. Sincerely, Moses Thanks for the congrats.
Gass Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Simply lovely with a touch of enchantment! Excellent poetry! Love, Robin
Culverhouse Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 10:09 AM
romantic, lovely
Golden Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 10:02 PM
This is wonderfully romantic, Jim! Lovely. Donna
Null Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Um, I love jasmine, I can smell it now just by reading your Haiku....Karla
Canady Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Jimbo ... that is such a romantic memory... Very Sensual for Jasmine (smile) Loved It MoonBee
Devonshire Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 12:19 PM
And a lovely scent is is! Beautiful description that evokes nostalgia and serenity, Jim. Aces again! Love you, carolyn
Richards Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 7:45 AM
This is beautiful, James. Wistful, filled with melancholy and sweet! ~ love, Carrie
Sheart Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 6:44 AM
A beautiful Haiku James, you've out done yourself! Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Love Light Truth Patricia
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 2:28 AM
what a beauty,so romantic,sweet nostalgia flows here,to my favs Jim--ery talented-Charma
Strand Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 12:20 AM
Lovely aromatic words Jim.thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Beautiful work JMG, this speaks volumes...Raul
Mchugh Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 11:44 PM
Inspiring read.
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October 2, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Nice Haiku, James. She must have been a beauty to be remebered by you. Thank you for your comment on my "Hunted". You understand me...
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