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JASMINE

wishful petals bloom
dance upon my memories
soothing scents of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/7/2009 10:36:00 AM
Sweet Haiku! my son is also Jimbo! thank you for your comment, love Simone
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Date: 11/3/2009 4:53:00 PM
hmmm I want a different word line 3? first word? something with more sweetness? Light & Love
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Date: 10/28/2009 2:45:00 PM
Odoriferous romance you wrote here Goff. SWEEEET!
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Date: 10/8/2009 4:17:00 PM
Like the Haiku. That Jasmine has a lovely scent. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2009 11:39:00 PM
Always a lovely aroma to your poetry Jim.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome blog comments today
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:12:00 AM
She must have been pure James, that's what I read in your Haiku, as the wishful petals bloom. Smile. Sincerely, Moses Thanks for the congrats.
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Date: 10/4/2009 4:43:00 PM
Simply lovely with a touch of enchantment! Excellent poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/4/2009 10:09:00 AM
romantic, lovely
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Date: 10/3/2009 10:02:00 PM
This is wonderfully romantic, Jim! Lovely. Donna
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Date: 10/3/2009 6:15:00 PM
Um, I love jasmine, I can smell it now just by reading your Haiku....Karla
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Date: 10/3/2009 3:28:00 PM
Jimbo ... that is such a romantic memory... Very Sensual for Jasmine (smile) Loved It MoonBee
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Date: 10/3/2009 12:19:00 PM
And a lovely scent is is! Beautiful description that evokes nostalgia and serenity, Jim. Aces again! Love you, carolyn
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Date: 10/3/2009 7:45:00 AM
This is beautiful, James. Wistful, filled with melancholy and sweet! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 10/3/2009 6:44:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku James, you've out done yourself! Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/3/2009 2:28:00 AM
what a beauty,so romantic,sweet nostalgia flows here,to my favs Jim--ery talented-Charma
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Date: 10/3/2009 12:20:00 AM
Lovely aromatic words Jim.thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/3/2009 12:09:00 AM
Beautiful work JMG, this speaks volumes...Raul
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Date: 10/2/2009 11:44:00 PM
Inspiring read.
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Date: 10/2/2009 11:42:00 PM
Nice Haiku, James. She must have been a beauty to be remebered by you. Thank you for your comment on my "Hunted". You understand me...
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