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Candy to the eyes but don’t eat :)

Jasmine

Jasmine

     blackened, fruity
          climbing, ripened, infused —
               vibrant, playful, valiant, blissful

                                                        berries

                                                      7/2/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 11:38 PM
A very descriptive one you have written in this one. Thanks for sharing and the information. I appreciate the visits to my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 11:13 AM
I forgot all about writing this one. Thank you, dear Sara!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 5:17 AM
I like the way you took us on a journey from smell to taste, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Thank you, Caren! They’re lovely, but don’t eat the berries!
Faulkner Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 1:10 PM
I love the smell of jasmine, but do not think I would enjoy the taste-
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:49 AM
It’s poisonous! The smell is wonderful!
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