Jasmine

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Candy to the eyes but don’t eat :)

Jasmine blackened, fruity climbing, ripened, infused — vibrant, playful, valiant, blissful berries 7/2/2019

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Date: 2/5/2023 11:38:00 PM

A very descriptive one you have written in this one. Thanks for sharing and the information. I appreciate the visits to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2023 11:13:00 AM

I forgot all about writing this one. Thank you, dear Sara!

Date: 7/6/2019 5:17:00 AM

I like the way you took us on a journey from smell to taste, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2019 6:50:00 AM

Thank you, Caren! They’re lovely, but don’t eat the berries!

Date: 7/5/2019 1:10:00 PM

I love the smell of jasmine, but do not think I would enjoy the taste-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2019 6:49:00 AM

It’s poisonous! The smell is wonderful!