Jar of Me

I sit inside this jar Watching through the glass As life proceeds without me I sit inside this jar Waiting for nothing My ambitions aimless I sit inside this jar Wasting... Decaying... Deteriorating... Soon I will be nothing But dust At the bottom Of this jar

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 12/6/2013 9:39:00 PM

Great poem, Andy. Somewhat sade as well, we sometimes hide ourselves from our own potential, and have to learn to get out of our own way, and break thru our shell, and find ourselves. Deep expression, enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/5/2013 5:29:00 PM

Andy nice work Welcome to the Soup!

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 11/29/2013 11:23:00 PM

A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief