I perceive words, syllables, and sounds as living things. They have colors, scents, and tastes... Important is vocal harmony: PL/BL; F(t)L/FL, look/like/light; FL/CL/SL/FL
sweet white plum blossoms… softly floating in the air they look like light snow distant Fujiyama’s peak – fleecy clouds so slowly flow
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