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January's Touch

northern freezing hell 
 firework on resolutions
   big round rivers fete

    beginning and end
of garnet year memories
fresh carnations dreams 

(c)Olive Eloisa
May 13, 2015
9:33 pm

Sponsor	        SKAT A
Contest Name	Two Haiku (Month of January) 
8th place.. :)

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2014 4:09:00 PM One more time, thank you for the replies.... hugs Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2014 4:09:00 PM Glad to see you smiling always...Linda Login to Reply

Saba Khan Date: 6/8/2014 11:49:00 PM Congratulations :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 2:42:00 PM Thank you.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/8/2014 11:43:00 PM Wonderful haikus Olive,, loved the first one n more so the second ,,, congrats on great win dear ! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 2:41:00 PM Thank Dr. Upma.. :) GBU

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/8/2014 5:50:00 PM Congratulations, Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 2:41:00 PM Thanks:) ,, olive eloisa

Paul Callus Date: 6/8/2014 1:16:00 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi :) Enjoyed both haiku, but slightly prefer the 2nd to the first. I love carnations with perfume...even in dreams. // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/8/2014 12:46:00 PM Congrats on your win Olive... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2014 10:48:00 AM It's a freezing hell all right!!! I especially loved the beautiful carnations you added into this one at the end. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/8/2014 9:46:00 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Olive Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/8/2014 8:37:00 AM OLIVE, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 2:39:00 PM most welcome Skat. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2014 10:47:00 AM thank you for the comment on my comment Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 2:38:00 PM :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/15/2014 10:07:00 PM Wow "freezing hell in north" You just know when you start like that, this will be a GREAT poem!!!!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/16/2014 12:22:00 AM wehehehehew it must e or else Arthur hahahha... :D

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/14/2014 12:05:00 PM Olive, that's how it is down here where I'm at... enjoyed this small write.. Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 9:38:00 AM Thaks much Linda..:)

Michael Dom Date: 5/14/2014 7:31:00 AM yes, that last line is something special :-) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/21/2014 12:35:00 PM Thanks much..:)

Joseph May Date: 5/14/2014 6:48:00 AM Very nice haiku ..love the "fresh carnation dreams"... Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/14/2014 2:09:00 PM Thank you Joseph..:) I appreciate you drop by..:)

Aiyah Torres Date: 5/13/2014 1:49:00 PM great imagery.. love it!!! :O) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/13/2014 5:21:00 PM Thanks much Aiyah..:) Gbu

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/13/2014 1:43:00 PM Beautiful imagery - love it! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/14/2014 5:24:00 AM Thanks much for the read.. ;) GBU