Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Haiku

January's Touch

northern freezing hell 
 firework on resolutions
   big round rivers fete

    beginning and end
of garnet year memories
fresh carnations dreams 

(c)Olive Eloisa
May 13, 2015
9:33 pm

Sponsor	        SKAT A
Contest Name	Two Haiku (Month of January) 
8th place.. :)

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Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 4:09 PM Glad to see you smiling always...Linda

Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 4:09 PM One more time, thank you for the replies.... hugs

Saba Khan June 8, 2014 at 11:49 PM Congratulations :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:42 PM Thank you.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 8, 2014 at 11:43 PM Wonderful haikus Olive,, loved the first one n more so the second ,,, congrats on great win dear ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:41 PM Thank Dr. Upma.. :) GBU

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:50 PM Congratulations, Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:41 PM Thanks:) ,, olive eloisa

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 1:16 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi :) Enjoyed both haiku, but slightly prefer the 2nd to the first. I love carnations with perfume...even in dreams. // paul

Joseph May June 8, 2014 at 12:46 PM Congrats on your win Olive...

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 10:48 AM It's a freezing hell all right!!! I especially loved the beautiful carnations you added into this one at the end. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 9:46 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Olive

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:37 AM OLIVE, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:39 PM most welcome Skat. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 10:47 AM thank you for the comment on my comment Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:38 PM :)

Arthur Vaso May 15, 2014 at 10:07 PM Wow "freezing hell in north" You just know when you start like that, this will be a GREAT poem!!!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 16, 2014 at 12:22 AM wehehehehew it must e or else Arthur hahahha... :D

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2014 at 12:05 PM Olive, that's how it is down here where I'm at... enjoyed this small write.. Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 9:38 AM Thaks much Linda..:)

Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:31 AM yes, that last line is something special :-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 21, 2014 at 12:35 PM Thanks much..:)

Joseph May May 14, 2014 at 6:48 AM Very nice haiku ..love the "fresh carnation dreams"... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 14, 2014 at 2:09 PM Thank you Joseph..:) I appreciate you drop by..:)

Aiyah Torres May 13, 2014 at 1:49 PM great imagery.. love it!!! :O) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 5:21 PM Thanks much Aiyah..:) Gbu

Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 1:43 PM Beautiful imagery - love it! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 14, 2014 at 5:24 AM Thanks much for the read.. ;) GBU