January Twenty-Fifth

January twenty-fifth 
silver locks idle talk with
age comes wisdom an old myth
a dance holding firmly fixed walker 


1/18/2020
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Knowlton Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:13 AM
I certainly feel the creek and the cold Eve. Love these short poems. Good one.
Kauffman Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Happy Birthday Eve. Adding candles to our cake does not render us sidewal superindendants in builiding the kingdom or poetry! Birthday blessings.
Wolves Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 4:45 PM
very nice poem. when I'm 90 Ill be rolling in a wheelchair powered by speakers blasting AC/DC.... bwahahahaha
Krutsinger Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Ah, I am sending you warm thoughts as I think of you while I read this one, Eve.
Somadas Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Advance Happy Birthday dear Eve.. Age is just a number.. Your poems are eternal..
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 5:48 AM
We share the same special day Eve, I am faving this with its wise words especially about the silver hair - lets keep on dancing with our words leaping off the page:-)Wishing you an early Happy Birthday - I celebrated mine with friends yesterday as we are busy on the actual day:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 19, 2020 at 5:46 AM
yes with age comes wisdom.. but there are sill a few who never learn... nice one Eve.
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