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January Sunrise

January Sunrise Arresting carnations through divulged eyes, o'er bursting citrus stretching a punchbowl --drapes prized quilt of January's Sunrise. Underneath confident amorphous skies, a year dawns, snowdrops grow in icy knoll. Arresting carnations through divulged eyes, fan a nippy faint frost neath earth's disguise, since a chilled session saunters in its role --drapes prized quilt of January's Sunrise. Pomegranate seeds spur garnet to prize as a crimson cardinal whorls midst troll. Arresting carnations through divulged eyes, as spacious house scores quiet time surprise. Resolution course, move on and console --drapes prized quilt of January's Sunrise. View a sanguine sun slipping down edgewise, month's shift gears, first of twelve, on cruise control. Arresting carnations through divulged eyes, --drapes prized quilt of January's Sunrise. 2020 July 02 *3rd Place* Month of the year I like most ~Mohan Chutani
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Mishra Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 12:06 AM
This is a wonderfully painted image of January William. It is so splendid that each line unflods intself like a warm carpet on white snow adding to the gorgeous scenery. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 12:54 AM
Your graciousness expounds, Aditi, with exceeding joy that is most welcomed, my friend -- thank you -- Aloha~@William
Faulkner Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 11:02 AM
A new start depicted so vividly, congratulations on your placement, William!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:51 PM
I appreciate your thoughtful considerations, Michelle, thank you -- Aloha~@William
Agustin Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:49 PM
I am grateful for your kind blessings, Beata, truly -- Aloha~@William
Chutani Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:50 AM
'Arresting carnations through divulged eyes'. William, with this starting line, you conjured a lovely start to the year in January. Congratulations for a well deserved top honours in my contest. Best. Mohan.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:18 AM
Thanks for the opportunity, Mohan, a pleasure to oblige for I am humble my friend for my honorable placement -- Aloha~@William
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 3:46 PM
I love this scene of beauty you have expressed so eloquently William. This form is challenging and you created a wonderful entry for the contest I hope it is a top winner. I am putting this gem into my faves! Happy 4th of July! I hope the earthquake didn’t cause any damage. Aloha my friend. Blessings Connie xxoo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Ah! Sweet of you, Connie, the epitome of gracefulness typical of an island woman, -- Aloha! William
Pandit Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 6:54 AM
Loved the scenic journey through your words, William. Expertly rendered hues of sunrise.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 10:37 AM
Many thanks for your kindness, Vijay -- Aloha~@William
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