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january machinations

under a sullen moon
silence hovered
my mind meandered
the two soon
inextricably
entwined



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sands Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Very nice. I was looking at the moon lastnight too. This is beautiful :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi ~ have a lovely day.
Bose Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 6:55 AM
Just what happened to me last night ... I love that concise language and brevity can truly capture a mood. Thanks for it.
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thank you very much, David, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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