Pandita Sietesantos Poet Haiku

January Haiku

January Dreams

woeful winds whistling
cold breath hoping for warm love - 
January sighs


trees tremble and shake  
wearing thick blankets of snow -
dream of summer sun

06-06-2014

Contest:    Two Haiku (Describing the Month of January)
Sponsor:    SKAT A
Placement: HM

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Harry Horsman October 9, 2014 at 11:33 AM scrolling down your list,,you really do write amazing Haikus Pandita Sietesantos October 9, 2014 at 3:43 PM Thank you so very much, dear Harry for your continued encouragement and support! I going to try improving my haikus:-). Warmest regards. Padita

Kika Ayala August 29, 2014 at 11:16 PM beautifully done! I love these winter haikus! Congratulations, Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos August 29, 2014 at 11:44 PM Thank you so very much, Kika. I really appreciate your kind compliments! Pandita

Mohan Chutani June 8, 2014 at 9:53 PM Pandita, very well written Haikus on winter and January. Congrats on win. Mohan Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 10:53 PM Thanks, Mohan, my friend, really appreciate your kind compliments!

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 7:57 PM no problem, thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:48 PM Nice win...pd Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 7:45 PM Thank you so much for the compliment. Really appreciate it!!!!Best wishes.

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 1:26 PM A nice set of haiku; but the first is outstanding! Congrats ona fine placing. // paul Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thank you so much, Paul for your kind compliments; and I agree with you the first one is the better of the two. Please visit again!

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 11:01 AM that first one is just outstanding. Can't understand why only an HM. Congrats though. I love yours. Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 12:01 PM Thank you so very much, Andrea, for your kind compliments. I always appreciate hearing from you!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 10:05 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 12:00 PM Many thanks, Dr. Ram for your kind compliments!

Barbara Gorelick June 8, 2014 at 9:25 AM Coongrats my dear...oh those January sighs. BG Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 10:04 AM Thank you so very much, Barbara. It is always good to receive your compliments and support!

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:41 AM PANDITA :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 10:03 AM Many thanks, again, SKAT for your encouraging comments and for your continued support!

Kelly Deschler May 28, 2014 at 12:56 PM Even though winter is one of my favorite seasons, I'm glad to see those cold days are finally gone. You beautifully captured January's feel in this poem. Nice work, Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos May 28, 2014 at 1:38 PM Thank you for your warm:) compliments, Kelly! Like you I am glad for the warm weather but winter has its own brand of beauty!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 19, 2014 at 1:04 PM - I always dream about spring and summer - Lovely haiku, Pandita - Good luck in the contest, hope you win - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Pandita Sietesantos May 19, 2014 at 1:14 PM You are so sweet! Thank you for the good wishes!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen May 18, 2014 at 11:36 PM A good dream Pandita Sietesantos May 19, 2014 at 7:05 AM Thank you so much for your kind comment!