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January Haiku

sound of rain falling through long January night- under warm blankets face in the mirror reflects yet another year- the teapot steaming

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/9/2014 3:08:00 PM

This is a lovely pair of haiku; I slightly prefer the second one. Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/8/2014 11:48:00 PM

Great ones Barbara ! U cud very well make haikus rhyme too ,, congrats on win !

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/8/2014 5:55:00 PM

These both can easily stand on their own! The last one I can identify so well !! Excellent.....should be higher ! :)

Carrie Richards
Date: 6/8/2014 5:58:00 PM

We are hotter than you know what !!! LOL !

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/8/2014 5:57:00 PM

Thanks Carrie..one never knows...hope all is well with you up there in northern Ca..BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 5:54:00 PM

Congrats. .pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2014 10:50:00 AM

barbara, I just love finding haiku of yours on winners' list. They are always GOOD ones. Congrats to you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2014 9:48:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Barbara

Theresa Stephens

Date: 6/8/2014 9:11:00 AM

Hi Barbara, Great Haikus. Congrats on your placement. Particularly can appreciate warm blankets on cold January nights. Good descriptions! Regards Theresa xx

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:38:00 AM

NICE WIN.....SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2014 5:20:00 PM

VERY nicely written haiku, Barbara. Hope they do very well in the contest.

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/8/2014 10:16:00 PM

As the Beatles sang - "The kettle is on the boil and we're so easily torn away" Enjoyable 575 haikus. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2014 2:17:00 AM

Nice write on January, Barbara