January

J ust as I started to fall for you
A nother entered my life.
N o, I was not expecting it to happen there
U nder the Oak where we first met.
A nyone would have been taken aback
R eminiscences of our young love
Y et are you there...in her eyes.


   Born 1/8

Written: 8/9/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Dan, you have made January full of love and lost love, a lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my ravaged poem
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:32 AM
Oh Dan this is charming good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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