January

Jarring chill from winter’s day
A flush of cheeks, an icy nose
Nature covers a white blanket 
Upon a shivering country road. 
As days shorten, night descends
Releasing a host of brilliant stars
Yet another year anew begins. 


Written on 1/3/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Nicely done -- love the release of those stars and the rhyme of descends and begins. Win also rhymes, and that's what your poem did. Congrats! ~ Gershon
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January 17, 2019 at 9:54 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
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January 7, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Gorgeous flowing Arcostic! Congratulations on your top win Laura! :) xomo
Leiser Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Maureen! :)
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:49 PM
so beautifully descriptive Laura, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you, Jan!
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January 6, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Love the bright crisp imagery of this, Laura, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest!
Leiser Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Thank you so much for placing me in your contest, Michelle! I’m thrilled you liked my poem! :)
Smith Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 12:20 PM
A standout piece to showcase your abilities and promotes poetry in best light and hopefully inspires others to give it a go. You also have showed how classicism is still relevant using phrases that this generation of poets should study. Happy New year Laura from David in NZ
Leiser Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Thank you for your many compliments to my simple poem, David! Happy New Year! :)
Makama Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 10:35 AM
New, new, new... Its beauty, its expression, its creativity and its flare... This is breath taking and this year will definitely give us the fulfillment we seek. Wonderful write full of envious sentences...
Leiser Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Funom! I'm happy you liked this one! :)
One Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Lovely...
Leiser Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Thank you, Silent! :)
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January 4, 2019 at 3:25 PM
scintillating write, laura, embodying the essence of this month... very fine!...huggs
Leiser Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thanks so much, Nette! I’m always excited when you comment on my poetry! :)
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