Jan's Pans

She writes of the stuff in the loo, amused by the odour of poo - she has me in fits describing her sh.ts (though others believe it's taboo...) written 19th March about Jan Allison for Margarita's Paean on Poets contest

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Joe Maverick

Date: 4/24/2022 2:29:00 PM

What some might term a execrable piece Jack.. though you have got the drop of things here Anyways.' that's the only term I can think of Using commensurate to the content you have Exposed often oblivious readers to.' May roses of success be raised up from The fertile beds of your imaginative bent.'

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2022 10:39:00 AM

I'm so glad you wrote this fun limerick, and equally glad Jan enjoyed it, as did I, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/19/2022 4:02:00 AM

Wonderful tribute to Jan, Jack, congratulations:)

Margarita Lillico

Date: 4/18/2022 7:53:00 AM

HAHAHA, ok, Jack, I did rack my brain with this placement, but no matter how I looked at it, the lines aligned with the requirements of a limerick perfectly and LOL was in place! Congrats! M.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/18/2022 3:03:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/17/2022 9:39:00 PM

Very interesting write. Congratulations!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/6/2022 9:21:00 AM

Love our Jan and well done on this Limerick. love phyl

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/31/2022 2:33:00 PM

Hahaha!! Your limerick is hilarious, Jack, and the title is awesome!! Thank you for the laughs. Well done, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2022 4:15:00 PM

omg lol this is absolutely hilariarse lol:-) thanks so much my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/20/2022 11:22:00 AM

Excellent limerick, Jack. Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/19/2022 5:13:00 PM

Yes, it could be a little taboo. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2022 3:18:00 PM

hahah. VERY good one.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 3/19/2022 10:41:00 AM

I was just looking for Jan's comment, not here yet, but, surely will be, this limerick is straight up her street, Jack, nice one, ha, ha, ha . . . ; )

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/19/2022 10:34:00 AM

Jan’s stuff is quite funny, you’re right // about things most keep out of sight // You’ve taken good care // That’s nice meter there // a tribute”s a swell thing to write!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/19/2022 9:18:00 AM

Great! We need people to make us laugh.