Jan's Pans

She writes of the stuff in the loo,
amused by the odour of poo -
she has me in fits
describing her sh.ts
(though others believe it's taboo...)

written 19th March about Jan Allison for Margarita's Paean on Poets contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/24/2022 2:29:00 PM
What some might term a execrable piece Jack.. though you have got the drop of things here Anyways.' that's the only term I can think of Using commensurate to the content you have Exposed often oblivious readers to.' May roses of success be raised up from The fertile beds of your imaginative bent.'
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Date: 4/21/2022 10:39:00 AM
I'm so glad you wrote this fun limerick, and equally glad Jan enjoyed it, as did I, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/19/2022 4:02:00 AM
Wonderful tribute to Jan, Jack, congratulations:)
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Date: 4/18/2022 7:53:00 AM
HAHAHA, ok, Jack, I did rack my brain with this placement, but no matter how I looked at it, the lines aligned with the requirements of a limerick perfectly and LOL was in place! Congrats! M.
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Date: 4/18/2022 3:03:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 4/17/2022 9:39:00 PM
Very interesting write. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/6/2022 9:21:00 AM
Love our Jan and well done on this Limerick. love phyl
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Date: 3/31/2022 2:33:00 PM
Hahaha!! Your limerick is hilarious, Jack, and the title is awesome!! Thank you for the laughs. Well done, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/20/2022 4:15:00 PM
omg lol this is absolutely hilariarse lol:-) thanks so much my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2022 11:22:00 AM
Excellent limerick, Jack. Janice
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Date: 3/19/2022 5:13:00 PM
Yes, it could be a little taboo. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/19/2022 3:18:00 PM
hahah. VERY good one.
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Date: 3/19/2022 10:41:00 AM
I was just looking for Jan's comment, not here yet, but, surely will be, this limerick is straight up her street, Jack, nice one, ha, ha, ha . . . ; )
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Date: 3/19/2022 10:34:00 AM
Jan’s stuff is quite funny, you’re right // about things most keep out of sight // You’ve taken good care // That’s nice meter there // a tribute”s a swell thing to write!
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Date: 3/19/2022 9:18:00 AM
Great! We need people to make us laugh.
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