Jan's Pans

She writes of the stuff in the loo,
amused by the odour of poo -
she has me in fits
describing her sh.ts
(though others believe it's taboo...)

written 19th March about Jan Allison for Margarita's Paean on Poets contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Maverick Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 2:29 PM
What some might term a execrable piece Jack.. though you have got the drop of things here Anyways.' that's the only term I can think of Using commensurate to the content you have Exposed often oblivious readers to.' May roses of success be raised up from The fertile beds of your imaginative bent.'
Proxenos Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 10:39 AM
I'm so glad you wrote this fun limerick, and equally glad Jan enjoyed it, as did I, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Daniel Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Wonderful tribute to Jan, Jack, congratulations:)
Lillico  Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 7:53 AM
HAHAHA, ok, Jack, I did rack my brain with this placement, but no matter how I looked at it, the lines aligned with the requirements of a limerick perfectly and LOL was in place! Congrats! M.
Agustin Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 3:03 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 9:39 PM
Very interesting write. Congratulations!
Babcock Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Love our Jan and well done on this Limerick. love phyl
Ashley Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Hahaha!! Your limerick is hilarious, Jack, and the title is awesome!! Thank you for the laughs. Well done, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 4:15 PM
omg lol this is absolutely hilariarse lol:-) thanks so much my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Excellent limerick, Jack. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 5:13 PM
Yes, it could be a little taboo. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 3:18 PM
hahah. VERY good one.
Shaw Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 10:41 AM
I was just looking for Jan's comment, not here yet, but, surely will be, this limerick is straight up her street, Jack, nice one, ha, ha, ha . . . ; )
Kyser Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Jan’s stuff is quite funny, you’re right // about things most keep out of sight // You’ve taken good care // That’s nice meter there // a tribute”s a swell thing to write!
Alex Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Great! We need people to make us laugh.
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