Janet

Janet
luscious red hair
long and flowing
white milky skin
smooth to the touch
thats how i met her 
doomed from the start
it's my only hope
it's my only chance
for romance

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Robert Pettit

Date: 9/16/2012 7:31:00 PM

Janet seems very nice by your description, but don't be fooled into thinking she is the only woman out there. If she doesn't like you, then you are wasting your time with her. There are many other nice girls out there. You just have to find them.

Bradley Cox
Date: 9/16/2012 7:56:00 PM

she is just a girl in my mind thank you for reading and sharing with me