Jane

a fair wind stirs my orange 
pearl buried in the whorls of sand

cracked from the hard 
shell and mangled by rolling seas
venus lies

return my fallen vessel
let your sails unfurl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 1:20 PM
- Ralph, short....but a awesome poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 9:13 PM
an unusual poem! Quite interesting one that I have enjoyed tonight.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Fantastic poem with aquatic terms that embellish its poetic flavor. Kudos! And mery xmas
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December 24, 2013 at 3:31 AM
Ralph--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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