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a fair wind stirs my orange pearl buried in the whorls of sand cracked from the hard shell and mangled by rolling seas venus lies return my fallen vessel let your sails unfurl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/19/2014 1:20:00 PM
- Ralph, short....but a awesome poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:13:00 PM
an unusual poem! Quite interesting one that I have enjoyed tonight.
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Date: 12/25/2013 11:44:00 AM
Fantastic poem with aquatic terms that embellish its poetic flavor. Kudos! And mery xmas
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Date: 12/24/2013 3:31:00 AM
Ralph--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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