Jane

Love of your smile that’s bigger than alL
And not the beautiful portrayed by the mediA 
Under every sky and star I want to lay with yoU 
Remembering all the times we’ve spent togetheR
Ending every night with a kiss so soft and nicE
Never leaving your side until the return of the suN
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 24, 2010 at 1:54 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ernest. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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January 24, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. what a unique acrostic poem from beginning to end ..east and west... very much the genius... continue to share your creative writing with us all... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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January 23, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Thatt was awesome and surprised you don't have more comments than mine, are you giving comments? enjoyed this read here and have a great sunday. :)
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