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THIS IS A TRUE LIFE STORY SENTANCING WAS THE 12TH OF SEPTEMBER 2024..!!
January twenty first, 2024 the above thugs burst.' Into a shop in Wallsal town, two with axes smashing Windows to the ground' then six of them stormed into this Store, a multicultural vist.? I will add no more.' Their Shotguns were fired nice and loud, to announce no doubt dilwali and they Were'nt just an ordinary crowd.' then a stupid employee Got in the way, of a shotgun blast..It hit his arm so they Say? Another was injured by trauma to the neck..' yet Really..I ask what did they expect.? From an upwardly Mobile gang about town, what the heck' who eschewing permits just Park and do.' Whatever is needed with unlicensed guns (too true!) Yet they did get aprehended, that will put a hold on their Fun..Jamal had escaped. Just after.' He left British shores' on the run He never got extradited..That fact i can't ignore.! He was Arrested when he got back to town, and for a space of Nine years he has now been sent down, some of the others Got five years others barely two..) and yet 'this is law?) Heres what i'll tell you..' its five years in jail for each Un-licensed gun..So if they had two? I make that ten years Number one..' Next lets talk shells or bullets again it's Five years per item.' Are you getting this plain.? Then theres The robbery?? And illiegal parking to boot.' I just cant see Much correlatilon..My reactiion is oh shoot..!

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Date: 9/14/2024 6:10:00 AM
Don't know about this one -- certainly tragic, evil. But license is a tax, eventually to tax you out of existence. Maybe 30 families on my block. I believe all are gun owners, except for a few; some guns passed down through the family for generations. Probably many have several guns to a household. 40 years on this neighborhood street. Never an incident that I am aware of. And I am friends with many.
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Date: 9/14/2024 1:17:00 PM
In the U K through the decades On fun-fairs or Carny stalls USA and Australia, on a big set out you would find target stalls these Had live 22calibre rifles quite a Surprise to me' they were only short 22 bullets addmited.' they must have got phased out late 1980s?? Yet there was no trouble ( it was the Christian ethos being strong Then!) thanks Joe Dimino.)

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