Jamaica Islands

Sun blazed;
Crystal clear
Skies, sparkle
Diamonds of
True beauty bliss...

Jamaica Islands
Exports with "JAH LOVE",
NO DISCRIMINATION.

SO Break-Out the tanning-oil
and beach towel kick-off 
your shoes, let your
Hair down N' hang- loose...
For awhile.

Take A swim to refresh 
Your mind and feel relaxed
Sand tickling your toes.

Peacefully and Enjoy Life:
For "JAMAICA ISLANDS IS;
HERE TO STAY...." WE ARE
ALL ONE BIG FAM AT JAMAICA 
ISLANDS!!!"

Written By:
SWEET N' SOUR= CARMA

06-24-12


A Tribute to a great poet n' writer:
RICHARD PALMER        THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT
                                        SOUP " FAM" TO THE END....

Entered in contest Letting your hair down
Sponsored by: Yasmin Khan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Carma, congrats on your win, excellent ...David
Sanderson Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Thank you David....
Britt Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:10 PM
VERY NICE! This should be featured in a brochure for the Jamaican Islands. There you go being sweet again HAHA <3
Sanderson Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 9:48 PM
Wowww thanks for the comment Britt, TOTALLY AGREE!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:54 PM
Wish I saw this one higher on the list. it was a very nice one. I'd sure love to let my hair down there!!! congrats.
Sanderson Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 9:46 PM
Thanx Andrea, kinda wish it was a little higher on the list too, but satisfied that it was honored... Was very proud of this poem....
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carma**. Love, Carol
Sanderson Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Thank you carol, very much I'm am honored that it has won...
Palmer Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 12:27 AM
great poem I am blushing,really honoured Carma,looks like you have been to Jamaica more than once,go get em' in the contest,oxoxoxoxoxox
Sanderson Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Ps Thanx on the comment on the contest, really hope it wins...
Sanderson Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 10:18 AM
I was honored to do this one 4 U RICHARD, but actually I've never been there. I hope one day I will. That's if I could get my hubby to buy the tickets LOl.... Very please you liked it!!!! Xoxo JAH LOVe...
Courtney Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:41 PM
ggod poem Sweet
Sanderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:55 PM
"Thank You RC, for stopping bye Hugs"
Chakrapany Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 8:59 PM
really get the feeling of a sun bath on the James Bond beach .i like, the use of biblical word JAH LOVE, very much .thank you for sharing .jk
Sanderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Thank You jk, JAH is GOOD!!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Hey, this would work great in that contest about Letting Your Hair down. I really enjoyed this. Beaches rock and I would love one day to be on that island!
Sanderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:54 AM
I will give it a shot thanks Andrea!! And I wish to b on that island 2 someday, now all I have 2 do is convince my husband to get the tickets... LOl!!
Boyd Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 6:19 AM
Wish that I could go vist. It sounds wonderful. A very vivid write thank you for shareing. sincerly Bobb
Sanderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Thank you bobb, glad you enjoyed it!!!!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 6:03 AM
It has been a pleasure to read such a wonderful poem!! Lori
Sanderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 10:37 AM
Thanx for such a wonderful comment Lori, the pleasure was all mine...
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 5:36 AM
He's going to like this one Carma..you have such a beautiful heart!!!!
Sanderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Thank You my dear PACE;and he will like this I'm sure, a heart full of love for everyone!!!!
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