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Jalopy

J'aime la vie…I love life, with all that it brings
Alleviating the jarring pain of potholed roads
Labour uphill, thankful for easy descents, 
Observe the rules, most watchful for red lights
Plagued at times by ailments, wear and tear
Yet, like a defiant aging car, I chug on and on.


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11th July, 2023

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Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2025 at 9:22 AM

Found one I missed. I guess you had missed the contest from what I read below. So sorry. It would have been a winner

Paul Callus

August 31, 2025 at 1:45 AM

Sorry, Andrea, for giving you such a hard time!! ...but thank you for persevering. Glad you enjoyed it. Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley

November 5, 2023 at 11:12 AM

My dear friend, Paul, you are a classic! And your poetic verse is always a smooth ride upon the poetic page. Your metaphoric acrostic is a gem and your last line a poignant yet uplifting finale. Keep on chugging, my defiant and inspiring friend :) Your golden presence here in the Soup kitchen keeps the atmosphere bright! Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

November 6, 2023 at 11:07 AM

Thank you, Susan; your feedback is such a pleasure to read. I do my best to keep this old car on the road, and keeping myself occupied helps to distract the mind....so if you hear a chug chug chug turn round and give us a wave my dear friend! Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

September 11, 2023 at 1:59 AM

aww shame you missed the slot for the contest. your poem made me smile, some days I feel like a wreck for the scrap heap lol. hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

September 11, 2023 at 9:09 AM

Hi Jan! Talking of wrecks, you're not the only one! but I am sure that the scrap heap you mention is more in my vicinity than in yours :) Thank you for stopping by. Regards & Hugs // paul

Robert Lindley

August 26, 2023 at 11:32 AM

So reminds me of my own past. And yes, I did own two jalopy that kept me busy. Gonna fav this one, sho' brings back sweet memories of my youth... God bless..

Paul Callus

September 11, 2023 at 9:11 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and past experiences, Robert. The fav is also appreciated, my friend. Regards // paul

Brian Sambourne

August 2, 2023 at 7:59 AM

So true, Paul. Endurance, chugging along is vital as we age. A most relevant Acrostic for we seniors. Be well. Keep the engine running. Cheers, Brian

Paul Callus

September 11, 2023 at 8:48 AM

Thanks for stopping by, Brian. It is easy to slip into apathy, losing will-power, instead of moving on with determination. Best regards // paul

Judy Ball

August 2, 2023 at 3:06 AM

LOL Paul I can relate to this one. Am getting over being hit by a car on June 7th. No broken bones or concussion but lots of soft tissue damage and being hit full front my stomach is now giving me trouble. Also lower back pain and my neck s so painful it causes headaches. But I went back to work on July 18 on modified duties and shorter hours for awhile.My boss asked how I'm feeling and I said I'm okay, I can do this. A good write my friend. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

September 11, 2023 at 8:56 AM

Pls excuse the late reply; life has been hectic. I am so sorry for you, Judy. Your accident could have been much worse, but you still had to suffer from shock and pain...those invisible yet unwelcome after-effects. I hope recovery has been forthcoming. Thank you for your visit, my friend ~ regards & blessings // paul

Sara Kendrick

August 2, 2023 at 2:59 AM

I really like that last line. Aging seems to bring a determination to chug on. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

September 11, 2023 at 9:05 AM

Thank you, Sara. I hope to pay you another visit soon :) Blessings // paul

Panagiota Romios

August 1, 2023 at 12:56 PM

What a brilliant acrostic, I usually see ones that are not as deep, Contest or no, you know full well you are a winner as a writer and human being. Plus a first class gentleman. Pangie

Paul Callus

August 2, 2023 at 12:11 AM

Your lovely, sincere feedback is always a pleasure to read, Pangie...and your generous comments leave a sweet lingering taste....thank you! ~ Have a lovely satisfying day // paul

Jack Horne

July 15, 2023 at 6:43 AM

excellent - one that most of us can relate to here, Paul. Hope all's well with you in sunny Malta

Paul Callus

July 28, 2023 at 5:31 AM

Thank you, Jack. I think my car needs a good service:) // paul

Bill Baker

July 11, 2023 at 4:49 PM

Brought back memories of my past, Paul. Nice Acrostic poetry, my friend. Bill

Paul Callus

July 12, 2023 at 1:38 AM

Pleased you enjoyed and related to my Jalopy, Bill; thank you. Regards // paul

Ilene Bauer

July 11, 2023 at 12:32 PM

glad you wrote it anyway, paul! i enjoyed (and i'll award you first place in my book!)

Paul Callus

July 12, 2023 at 1:37 AM

Your generosity is truly appreciated, Ilene! Thank you :) Regards // paul

Paul Callus

July 11, 2023 at 10:36 AM

UGH ... Just my luck! Twice in quick succession I have missed the boat to another contest!! This time to Constance's Writing Challenge- J Words. C'est la vie! :)

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