Jake's hymn

Jake
It is not safe for you
To enter the forest
That belongs to the
Macaon natives
And I feel that the macaon natives
Feel that you are coming to
Destroy their forest
Any time now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Swan Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 6:46 AM
Now I'm curious! Who are the Macaon natives, and who is Jack. In my mind he is a child in an imaginary game...but I suspect it is deeper than that. 'Forest' is such a living word, yet with the mystery also.J :)
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June 24, 2024 at 2:32 PM
Sincere apologies, I didn't see the typo on Jake. J
kraas Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:59 AM
jacke is the right name The macaon is from Another country I NOT SURE WHICH COUNTRY tHEY ARE FROM
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