Jake's hymn

Jake It is not safe for you To enter the forest That belongs to the Macaon natives And I feel that the macaon natives Feel that you are coming to Destroy their forest Any time now

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 6/16/2024 6:46:00 AM

Now I'm curious! Who are the Macaon natives, and who is Jack. In my mind he is a child in an imaginary game...but I suspect it is deeper than that. 'Forest' is such a living word, yet with the mystery also.J :)

Jeanette Swan
Date: 6/24/2024 2:32:00 PM

Sincere apologies, I didn't see the typo on Jake. J

aldo kraas
Date: 6/24/2024 10:59:00 AM

jacke is the right name The macaon is from Another country I NOT SURE WHICH COUNTRY tHEY ARE FROM