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Jail Pains

I wake up in pain
my wrists have shiny handcuffs 
I am in jail  

My heart feels ice-cold
It will not stop its beating 
I wish it would stop

My cell mate is gone
I am feeling so alone
I just want to die

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Manmath Dalei Date: 4/3/2016 9:02:00 PM Hi Ellie, Welcome to poetry soup. It is a nice platform to express ur view through poem. Here we encourage each other to enhance confidence.It is nice to have a poet like u. Wish u a fruitful journey ahead. Take care.......hugs. Login to Reply Ellie Fields Date: 4/5/2016 3:55:00 PM Thank you for your kind welcoming! I have enjoyed it so far, and I hope you have too:) Good luck in writing poetry as well:) And hugs to you too:)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/3/2016 8:53:00 PM Hi Ellie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Ellie Fields Date: 4/5/2016 4:00:00 PM Thank you for welcoming me and reading my poem! I am a rookie in the poetry world, and I am grateful to have come across a person like you who is willing to view my poems. You are more than welcome to constructively criticize my poems. I enjoy receiving any help I can get to become a better poet. Good luck to you, and I will definitely read your poems:) Thank you, new poet friend:)