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..Jail House Preacher Man

jail house preacher man
ring the bell of freedom down
King's hallelujah

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2010 9:19:00 PM

Very nice, Deb, and thanks for your comment on the last line of my haiku. I showed my "haiku nut" friend some of my latest haiku, and she said, "pretty but not haiku. No personification for haiku, Andrea" GRRRR hahaha Luv, andrea

Terry Henderson

Date: 4/26/2010 5:17:00 PM

Great...I love it. I love to shout hallelujah. Thanks for your kind words for my poem happiness...Terry

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/25/2010 8:33:00 PM

'Sing hallelujah' indeed, Cher!...my favorite speech of Dr. King's was the one he made in Memphis right before his assassination...Tim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/24/2010 8:38:00 AM

Great work. Yours and Martin's. Thanks for your comments. Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2010 8:36:00 AM

Great take on the contest..Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2010 6:52:00 AM

A joyful poem....taking away the somber feel of the photo....I love it!! :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/24/2010 6:51:00 AM

We should never forget Dr. King's aims. Well written Senryu, Deborah! And thanks for your comments..Have a great sunday! Love, Gert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/23/2010 9:06:00 PM

What a fine tribute to Dr. King. I enjoyed it

Amy Green

Date: 4/23/2010 6:58:00 PM

Doris, you'd be amazed at other "groups" who are far more oppressed than women. Granted- I have been there 1st hand in the Navy, but Hispanics, folks from the Middle East, African American men, and especially Arab men are extremely oppressed in this country. It isn't right. None of it.

Amy Green

Date: 4/23/2010 6:54:00 PM

Nice- there is a lot in that picture to capture, you did a good job!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2010 6:14:00 PM

Love it D.G. love it nicely done a winner for sure..p.d.

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/23/2010 6:13:00 PM

Thanks for the lesson, Deborah..appreciate it..good imagery here also! Peace, audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 6:01:00 PM

good write, I started life after all the desegregation so I know no other life. Though I can see why some had to fight the system. And women had to fight for there rights. Women still need to stand up more for themselves. We are more oppressed than other groups.

..Jail House Preacher Man

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