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Author: jmfkiddo
Created: January 29, 2009 at 03:42 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Horror | Dark | Death
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments 68 views
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oh, beautiful disaster unholy master
cleanse by blood
shampoo with mud

oh, don't let the stars rain on my head
and I'm breathing but I'm dead
dead
dead as can be
I'm hiding in a tree

I look to watch the normal families
nobody ever sees
and they all sit together to eat
I leave when they leave the seat

if I'm the dick
than why are you all so sick
with circle in my house
all that candle fire douse

id like to kill them all
or make a phone call
but then id have a needle in my throat
pushing down, down, till an artery broke

my house is a beautiful disaster
my dad the unholy master
he took my virginity from me
ritual sins forever a part of me

yet, i control my own time
watch as i commit my first crime
the blade slides across the throat
she lets go and down he knife does float

her grace gushing out blood
out of the tree and into the mud
people came to look
but nobody ever found out why her own life she took
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May 28, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Jeremy, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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March 23, 2010 at 8:21 PM
what
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