Jagged

*For all people who struggle against adversity, deadly disease and oppression at the same time*

A bright mind wrapped in flakes of thorn 
A heart that braves the scoff and scorn 
A soul that wanders everywhere 
It walks on hills from here to there 

A body lamed and ripped and torn 
It bears the curse since time was born 
A rouge disease that claims its life 
Its soul is caught in mire of strife

Alone in dark, searching its soul 
Thinking of how to reach its goal 
The thorny mounds on its rough skin 
Defines the troubles it had been 

In dark of night, it shuns the light 
It is afraid of what is bright 
It builds some pricks around its nest 
To guard its heart from lurking pests

3rd place
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La France Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Roger, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
Roger  Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Thank you very much dear...
One Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Clever idea for this contest Roger.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Roger  Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Thank you very much...
Roper Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 6:51 PM
Love your take on the word “Jagged.” Good luck in the contest. Blessings and hugs my friend
Roger  Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Thank you very much...
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