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Jagged

Jutting out dangerously.
Attention needed urgently.
Gashed and hurtful no one liked. 
Grating metal barbed and spiked. 
Exposed wire to catch your clothes.
Dull and jagged everyone loathes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Speaks, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
Empress Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Very creative acrostic! Love that picture. Congratulations on winning. Always a pleasure reading you
One Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 7:28 AM
- Great done for the contest, best wishes :) - Have a lovely Sunday, S.V. :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise.
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