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Jaded Dreams

a strange dense fog keeps consuming my mind trapping me in a mucky bog I can't seem to leave behind a thick sticky mist clings to my every dream breath of the frog I kissed before he hopped down stream an evil taunting fairy tale haunts each sleeping hour a romanticized version of hell is beginning to devour what lingers in my heart's core the last remaining sliver of all sweet hope for my happily ever after

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/24/2016 11:46:00 PM
You have so perfectly described how many of my nights evolve.... shivering
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Date: 11/23/2016 7:11:00 AM
Great especially the second stanza. We expect frogs to turn into a delicious prince but alas frog breath clings and haunts! Nicely done, Christy!
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Date: 11/22/2016 6:45:00 PM
Christy, what a great rhyming poem, wonderful and I like the layout too .
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Date: 11/22/2016 5:51:00 PM
Some days are just like that, foggy and so hard to see anything worth while up ahead, but that fog will clear and your happily ever after will be waiting for you in the bright sunshine of a new day. Wonderfully expressed Christy
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