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Jaded Crystal

She went by the name of Crystal Faded but straight as a pistol Face showing the tick of the clock Many times she had circled the block Married twice but soon learned the rule: ‘Don’t tie yourself down to no fool’ Nose sniffing from snorting cocaine Her crazy blue eyes pierced the brain Distaining prim-prude social laws Unashamed she displayed her flaws Brutal truth often spit with a curse Busting big-shots with her horsehide purse Ex bartender, ex trucker, ex maid Eccentric and caustic. Unafraid... Smelling blood, she slashed like a shark Yet her smile could light up the dark *Loosely based on a lady I am proud to call a friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/4/2014 3:19:00 PM
Some people you have to admire even if you are only admiring them for surviving!!!Light & Love
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:12:00 PM
Tim,, Congratulations, In Giorgio's Impressing contest... Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, tim
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Date: 3/22/2014 5:46:00 PM
She sounds like a character from a movie, a book or a good ole' country song!! What a gal !!! LOL !
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:50:00 PM
- Tim, congratulations on your fine winning poem in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:31:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your sparkling write and win my dear friend Tim. TYSM for sharing as well! Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:36:00 PM
Hi Tim, going by the name of the crystal... Loving this one.. :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2014 11:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, tim
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Date: 3/18/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations... Tim... hugs.. SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2014 2:42:00 PM
okay, your mind works in unusual ways, tim...this glows even in the dark!.. warm congrats on your impressive win in my contest.. huggs
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Date: 3/18/2014 1:34:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win Tim in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2014 11:45:00 AM
Extraordinary character write Tim, Crystal may be hardened on the outside, but yet still soft on the inside.I love this one. Hugs
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Date: 3/13/2014 11:31:00 PM
hey, you did a woman too!!! That is so cool, Tim. Love how you named her "jaded." soupmail for ya.
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:51:00 AM
a beautiful poem... Linda
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Date: 3/12/2014 4:41:00 PM
Poem is so very human. I t shows so much depth to her character. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest this is a real winner for me.
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Date: 3/12/2014 4:16:00 PM
Fabulous...Seriously great work. You must have woken up with that poem running around in your head. Tim...this will do WELL! WOW! What a different take on the poem...I didn't try on this contest because nothing comes to mind......I know! I'm hopeless. Good luck!
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