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The pond's algae swirls artistically around the lily pads, captive oracle of the canoe's wake, velveteen green of a finer weft than the gown of a Queen's, richer in hue than the paint from Monet's pallet. The innate beauty of nature, most diminutive, thriving on earth, in water and under the fire of a setting sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/26/2012 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this vision of beauty, a painting indeed!
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:25:00 PM
Great descriptive winning work..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2012 3:03:00 PM
Oh yes cher! How true it is that nature paints the perfect living picture and even the greatest artst's rendering is still only a reproduction. Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 6/22/2012 8:28:00 AM
If ever I were find my poem in the same place as yours.... what better honor? As beautiful as this poem is, I do not need a painting by Monet to visualize!
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Date: 6/22/2012 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Debi with this beauty!Enjoyed.
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:26:00 PM
SO LOVELY, Debs. It reminds me of that green that appeared in Vienna's awesome blog today. Congratulations on a very well deserved win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 6/21/2012 6:00:00 PM
super congrats on first place win Debbie luv.. we are fantastic .. at beach for whole Summer for fun.. hope u are terrific too..
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:35:00 AM
Debbie ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)
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Date: 6/21/2012 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful winning poem.
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Date: 6/21/2012 2:41:00 AM
I said it was beautiful! Congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:24:00 AM
Beautiful, calming to read... Terry
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Date: 6/17/2012 11:45:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here...for Brian's I think.
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Date: 6/16/2012 7:20:00 PM
Reminds me of the lonely beauty of orange lichen found on the basalt boulders on the shores of Lake Superior in Northern Mn. Sweet poem...sweet Lady!
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