Jaded

The pond's algae swirls artistically around the lily pads, captive oracle of the canoe's wake, velveteen green of a finer weft than the gown of a Queen's, richer in hue than the paint from Monet's pallet. The innate beauty of nature, most diminutive, thriving on earth, in water and under the fire of a setting sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 2:23 AM
Congratulations on your win with this vision of beauty, a painting indeed!
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 12:25 PM
Great descriptive winning work..Congrats ..Sara
Ryerson Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Oh yes cher! How true it is that nature paints the perfect living picture and even the greatest artst's rendering is still only a reproduction. Congratulations on the win!
Richards Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 8:28 AM
If ever I were find my poem in the same place as yours.... what better honor? As beautiful as this poem is, I do not need a painting by Monet to visualize!
Poet Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your top win Debi with this beauty!Enjoyed.
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:26 PM
SO LOVELY, Debs. It reminds me of that green that appeared in Vienna's awesome blog today. Congratulations on a very well deserved win in Brian's contest!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 6:00 PM
super congrats on first place win Debbie luv.. we are fantastic .. at beach for whole Summer for fun.. hope u are terrific too..
A   Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Debbie ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)
Grisetti Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful winning poem.
O'Leary Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 2:41 AM
I said it was beautiful! Congratulations on your win... Terry
O'Leary Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Beautiful, calming to read... Terry
Poet Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Beautiful imagery here...for Brian's I think.
Goff Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 7:20 PM
Reminds me of the lonely beauty of orange lichen found on the basalt boulders on the shores of Lake Superior in Northern Mn. Sweet poem...sweet Lady!
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