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Jade Pond Lament

Written: September 11, 2025 ************** Silence of the elder boughs fills the room, Stillness is steeped with moss and lore. The room is tinged with dawn breath— peacefulness before the mayfly melody. Time, as a chalice, swells and streams, It's an amber hymn on the bay and shore. Woodland pond gleams in a verdant jade hue, Twilight's drifting waltz of many mayflies. Akin to humming hymns of speckled stone, Glide in bright weaves, invoking a final sigh. As they fade in the abyss of ashen shadows, Untimely, day-born, and evening requiem—  As they recede, the darkness inhales— a breathless ache, a swirling scream. The stars blink clear slowly and sadly. As if to celebrate each soul's downfall. What briefness dares a scene to bloom? What memorial does silence breed?
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Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 7:50 AM
- Even ashen shadows bloom in your wonderful poems, Las :) - I find this poem very sensitive - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 11:17 PM
You are the master of imagery, emotion and rhythm.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:55 PM
a haunting but soothingly written poem, Sotto. Your imagery is captivating. These lines resonated with me: The stars blink clear slowly and sadly. As if to celebrate each soul's downfall. You are an inspiration, sincerely.
Hind Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:31 PM
A haunting poem, Sotto - you wrote it with a lot of wisdom and grace
Rolland Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:12 PM
wonderful poem, images are so impressive and melodious, i love specially the image of the time, as a chalice, well done poet
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