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Jade

Jasmin said yes to the June starlit proposal- Jazz was playing as she joined him in complete awe- Joy surrounded lovers- Jade was her favorite jewelry...she said yes. March 4, 2017 Pleiades J

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Date: 3/9/2017 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful win, Luloo:) amazing how you weaved this beauty:)
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Date: 3/8/2017 3:54:00 PM
Romantic .. flowing and aptly depicting a very special occasion. How could one say no to a jade proposal:) Congratulations on yet another fine win, Laura! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:29:00 PM
Congrats! xx
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations Laura!! Well done my friend! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:09:00 PM
I like what you said ''the starlit proposal''. Fine pleiades. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 3/7/2017 7:44:00 PM
Awesome, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:01:00 PM
coming back with congrats!
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:50:00 PM
Love the story you told here..so romantic, too! Congrats on your win, Laura Loo :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 4:52:00 PM
A sweet, romantic story told in a smooth flowing fashion. Congrats on your 2nd place win, Laura! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/6/2017 6:15:00 PM
Love it !! xoxo
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Date: 3/5/2017 6:46:00 PM
I say yes too... Beautiful
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:38:00 AM
- A great pleiades, Laura :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2017 6:37:00 PM
Oh, what a lovely flowing pleiades. Good luck in the contest, luloo.
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Date: 3/4/2017 11:18:00 AM
Pretty. I had a lovely jade ring, from a Chinese childhood friend. I was going to give to my daughter. Someone stole it!! Nice poem!! All glitz
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