Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Jade

Jasmin said yes to the
                     June starlit proposal-
      Jazz was playing as she
               joined him in complete awe-
               Joy surrounded lovers-
          Jade was her favorite
                       jewelry...she said yes.



March 4, 2017
Pleiades J

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joanna Daniel March 9, 2017 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on your beautiful win, Luloo:) amazing how you weaved this beauty:)

Paul Callus March 8, 2017 at 3:54 PM Romantic .. flowing and aptly depicting a very special occasion. How could one say no to a jade proposal:) Congratulations on yet another fine win, Laura! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:14 AM - Congratulations on your win, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:29 PM Congrats! xx

Deborah Burch March 7, 2017 at 8:25 PM Congratulations Laura!! Well done my friend! Big Hugggs. Deb

Janis Medders Tobechi March 7, 2017 at 8:09 PM I like what you said ''the starlit proposal''. Fine pleiades. Congrats on your placement.

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:44 PM Awesome, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Agnes Krampe March 7, 2017 at 6:01 PM coming back with congrats!

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 5:50 PM Love the story you told here..so romantic, too! Congrats on your win, Laura Loo :)

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 4:52 PM A sweet, romantic story told in a smooth flowing fashion. Congrats on your 2nd place win, Laura! Blessings, Kim

Jeanie Bennett March 6, 2017 at 6:15 PM Love it !! xoxo

Pashang Salehi March 5, 2017 at 6:46 PM I say yes too... Beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 4:38 AM - A great pleiades, Laura :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe March 4, 2017 at 6:37 PM Oh, what a lovely flowing pleiades. Good luck in the contest, luloo.

Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2017 at 11:18 AM Pretty. I had a lovely jade ring, from a Chinese childhood friend. I was going to give to my daughter. Someone stole it!! Nice poem!! All glitz