Jade

Jade
 
                                      She sits moon-stil
                                      in the low tide of the afternoon
                                      ebbing the annoying scum after a robust ingress...
                                      A breeze from the bay, goose-bumped her breast
                                      and her eyes stabbed at jaded notes
                                      on ruffled sheets…..

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 7:52:00 AM

Today I have stopped back to read more of your excellent poetry Neil. I will be back again soon and hope to see some more poetry written here by you. Love, Carol