Jacuzzi

Sat in the Jacuzzi
Feeling quite woozy
Bubbles everywhere

Resting my mind
The relaxing kind
Simply not a care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 3:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Munoz Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Thats something I could go for on an everyday bases, nice folw to it. Please feel free to check my newest pieces.
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:20 AM
GERARD, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
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March 6, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Wonderful poem! It was a joy to read. A relaxing difference from all of the long poems out there! Short and sweet. Great write!
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