Jacqueline

Jacqueline was trim and lean never ran out of steam 
she ran and ran and never tired now isn't that a dream 
she did a sprint 
and won some mints  
Lifesaver ones, for her and her victorious team.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Dear Rose, your limerick is fun and sweet. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Rose. Enjoyed your fun Limerick.
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Thank you, Mala, for reading my poem, God bless
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Congrats on your fresh-mint win, ‘Rose’. Terry
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Thanks Terry for honoring me, your contest was fun
Kitchin Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Vienna, a cute one, congratulations on your winning placement!
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Thanks for stopping by Tania, much appreciated
Callus Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 1:42 AM
This is quite an enjoyable write, Vienna :) Don't we all have dreams! ... and hopefully many of them will find fulfilment. ~ Warm regards, my friend /x/ paul
Leffanta Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 11:44 AM
I would not advise running on a railway track, but enjoyed your limerick! Aloha!
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Thank you Rico, limericks are your forte,
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Lovely limerick. Fastest runner. Hugs.
Rose  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:48 PM
Yes indeed Victor, glad you like it,
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