Jack's Haiku

Now how about this When you're dying for a kiss I'll grant your last wish (My apologies)

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/7/2016 5:41:00 AM

I love this...a rhyming Haiku! This was wonderful...I hope I'm as cool as you one day Jack! :^D MC

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/7/2016 7:55:00 AM

You make me blush kind sir!!! Jack

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/8/2016 10:50:00 AM

Can I have one please?! .. Hey granddaddy ,I'm sorry if I had to leave you for a while.. I'm so glad to read your poem again! ..:) hope everything is fine.. :O)

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2016 10:55:00 AM

Love the granddaddy thingy!!! LOL Love, Jackson xxxxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2016 9:37:00 AM

you take the last// I'll have the first// the early bird chirps

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2016 9:45:00 AM

Best you stick with the lims!!!! LOL

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/8/2016 7:52:00 AM

A killer kiss eh Jack ! Chuckles :-)

Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/8/2016 9:53:00 AM

Laughter is the best medicine :-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/8/2016 8:54:00 AM

Chuckles... me too! Tis to laugh, eh!!!