Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Jack's Dark Side

Jacko has a dark side as well as one of fun
He laid out too long in the hot sizzling sun
Didn't turn over
Got over exposure
White in front but dark on his bum


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal May 10, 2015 at 9:27 PM Oh no!!! hehe, truly a funny one. I've lots to catch up on, I must apologize!! Always, Laura Jack Ellison May 11, 2015 at 1:09 PM Absolutely no need to apologize sweet Laura! Whenever, the spirit move ya!!! Love and gigantic hugs, Jacko xxx

Carol Eastman May 6, 2015 at 1:08 PM Hubby's favorite! He got sick and stayed home for 2 days from work... I Couldn't get near the computer... I swear he even took his naps... resting his head on the keyboard... Poor Fella! Jack Ellison May 6, 2015 at 4:53 PM Fooled ya, huh? Happy to hear hubby enjoyed it!!! Yee Haw!!! xxx

Casarah Nance May 3, 2015 at 7:42 AM Ouchie at least his man parts aren't burnt...lol Jack Ellison May 3, 2015 at 10:15 AM Thank Heaven for small mercies, as they say!!! LOL Huggsies, Jacko xxxx

Jan Allison May 3, 2015 at 6:09 AM posted - you have been warned lol! hugs jan xx Jan Allison May 3, 2015 at 12:19 PM Noooo Jack its not lol .... but then again ... it sure got you reading it! Hugs jan xxx Jack Ellison May 3, 2015 at 10:18 AM Very naughty title!!! LOL Hugs, Brother Jack xxx

Jan Allison May 3, 2015 at 5:52 AM have written 2 limericks today - cant wait for you to read them may post one later lol ... they have errrr creative titles lol! Hugs jan xx Jan Allison May 3, 2015 at 6:03 AM not posted them yet wait till the time is right lol:-) hugs jan xx Jack Ellison May 3, 2015 at 5:58 AM Heading right over there now!!! Hugs, Jack xxx

John Williams May 3, 2015 at 5:26 AM Very funny limerick Jack----made me laugh a lot-----very creative.......kind regards-----John Jack Ellison May 3, 2015 at 5:46 AM The title fooled ya eh!!! Yup... should have turned the other cheek! LOL John Williams May 3, 2015 at 5:28 AM You should've turn the other cheek Jack.hahaha.....John

Jan Allison May 3, 2015 at 5:13 AM ha ha ha - done to a turn:-) Hugs jan xx Jack Ellison May 3, 2015 at 5:49 AM Did you smell something burning!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx