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Jack's Dark Side

Jacko has a dark side as well as one of fun He laid out too long in the hot sizzling sun Didn't turn over Got over exposure White in front but dark on his bum

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Date: 11/30/2023 10:05:00 AM
Lol, you're on a roll today Jack, long live the king. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2023 2:17:00 PM
Having a ton of fun!!! lol
Date: 11/30/2023 5:18:00 AM
You are too funny today! What a spark plug! Hugs ~ Kim
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2023 5:41:00 AM
What is going on... very mild! Where's Santa? A sparknplug eh!!! Thought I'd try something a little different! lol xxx
Date: 11/30/2023 5:14:00 AM
oh no, Jack! Winter sunburns are the worst...then again, maybe it's frostbite! Loved reading your entertaining poem this morning. Have a splendid day, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2023 5:37:00 AM
Unusul mild November up here... almost no snow! Yee Haw Happy day xxx

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