Jack's Dark Side

Jacko has a dark side as well as one of fun He laid out too long in the hot sizzling sun Didn't turn over Got over exposure White in front but dark on his bum
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Edmonds  Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Never expose your bum to the sun - A scorched derrière is never fun - It will hurt to sit - On one’s cheeky bits - That’s no fun when a guy’s gotta run… Belle
Edmonds  Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Enjoying my day, it’s been glorious for a change. Love Belle xox
Ellison Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Love your humour Miss Elizabeth! Are you enjoying your day? However I do still have cheeky bits! Love, Happy Pappy XOX
Hankins Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Ewwww, I'll bet he won't ever do that again. Probably looks like toast burnt on one side!
Ellison Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Florida's great for tans but you need to rotate1 lol
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Lol, bet it hurts to sit, hope that snows gone. Tom
Ellison Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 6:41 AM
You betcha my friend... but it felt so good! I'll never learn!!! Cheers!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Giggles Galore! Sweet toasted buns! Good morning hugs my dear sweet Jack! xomo <3
Ellison Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Toasted butts! Yea Haw! Should have turned over but fell asleep... oh for those Florida days!!! Love Jacko! XOX
Allison Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 6:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 6:06 AM
So it made you chuckle did it!!! Happy day... love from Canada! XOX
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