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Jack's Dark Side

Jacko has a dark side as well as one of fun He laid out too long in the hot sizzling sun Didn't turn over Got over exposure White in front but dark on his bum

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Date: 5/30/2021 11:23:00 AM
Never expose your bum to the sun - A scorched derrière is never fun - It will hurt to sit - On one’s cheeky bits - That’s no fun when a guy’s gotta run… Belle
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2021 12:20:00 PM
Enjoying my day, it’s been glorious for a change. Love Belle xox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/30/2021 11:47:00 AM
Love your humour Miss Elizabeth! Are you enjoying your day? However I do still have cheeky bits! Love, Happy Pappy XOX
Date: 5/30/2021 8:43:00 AM
Ewwww, I'll bet he won't ever do that again. Probably looks like toast burnt on one side!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/30/2021 11:32:00 AM
Florida's great for tans but you need to rotate1 lol
Date: 5/30/2021 6:25:00 AM
Lol, bet it hurts to sit, hope that snows gone. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/30/2021 6:41:00 AM
You betcha my friend... but it felt so good! I'll never learn!!! Cheers!
Date: 5/30/2021 6:21:00 AM
Giggles Galore! Sweet toasted buns! Good morning hugs my dear sweet Jack! xomo <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/30/2021 6:36:00 AM
Toasted butts! Yea Haw! Should have turned over but fell asleep... oh for those Florida days!!! Love Jacko! XOX
Date: 5/30/2021 6:00:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/30/2021 6:06:00 AM
So it made you chuckle did it!!! Happy day... love from Canada! XOX

Book: Shattered Sighs